23 November 2007

I made a mistake

I went to a party to have some fun
I made a mistake and had some rum

I went to the king to chat with him
I made a mistake and gave back a ring

I went to the king to chat with him
I made a mistake and found a limb

I went to the kitchen to bake a cake
I made a mistake and baked some tape

I went to kitchen to eat a bun
I made a mistake and ate a gun (BOOM!)

3 comments:

Alice said...

this is the best poem I have ever read!

Menka said...

Max this is a very creative poem! I liked the last bit:
''I went to kitchen to eat a bun
I made a mistake and ate a gun (BOOM!)'' it was a really good poem. If it isn't only Max that did this poem well good work to all the people that did it.

Anonymous said...

Max, we think you will be a world famous poet one day :-) love Christopher and his Mum.